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English: Editing a piece of writing

16/12/2020

 
We have been writing our own version of the story called 'The Disgusting Sandwich'.

We had a go at improving Andrew's work by using a checklist to help us.

We helped make Andrew's writing even more exciting by adding in things such as adverbials and suffixes.


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